Imagine that you and your friends went on a trip on the Destin Harbor pirate ship cruise. Things start to seem strange when other pirate ships appear in a dark and ominous storm. All of a sudden you realize that you have traveled back in time on a pirate ship and only CORRECTLY PUNCTUATED DIALOG will help you return home safely!
Write about this adventure using vocabulary and names of REAL pirates from Week 13 Social Studies.
It was a nice and beautiful day. The best thing that is happening is ...that the whole class and a few parents are going to a cruise. The captain is dress into pirate he called himself Captain Chandler. While we were sailing. Out of no a huge portal showed up. The captain struggled and said" We are getting sucked in". I yelled "hold on!". The captain turned sharply to go to the portal. We saw a big black pirate with bandits waving their swords and shooting their guns up in the air. We were so scared until we got in the portal.
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Natalie
2/20/2014 10:49:57 am
Nice job Dar! You kind of left me hanging though. What happened after they all got sucked in the portal?
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janet duranko
2/12/2014 03:25:25 am
It was a hot sunny day and we were going on a cruise on a pirates shipthe pirates said" are you all ready"we all' awserd yes!". There were some people dress as pirates the captains name was Gasparilla he looked like he was a real pirate it was really cool.Then after a few hours we were in new Orleans. Then the captain yelled "the British are coming!'Then we realize they were real pirates. We all tryed not to panick,but we could not help it some people jumped out of the bout some got really scared.We found a time machine and we all went in it and we were all back home.
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dylan
2/12/2014 03:30:19 am
One day I went to desten harbor pirate ship I got a camera to take pictures of what I spotted. I began to see storm clouds apear but that wasn't the only thing strang I notced pirate ships apear in front of me. "I have just traveled back in time"shouted me. "Oh no pirates are coming" yelled me. "mom I dont want spain to rule florida". pirate plunederds are steeling money from me they aren't stoping for years and years and years.
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Cassidy C.
2/12/2014 03:40:05 am
One day I went on the Destin Harbor pirate ship cruis with my mates. ''The pirats on the ship was Mary Read and Anne Bonny the most wonderful girl pirats.'' yeld cassidy we went to go out to the sea but then the sky had pich black rain cloud storms. Then I heard a gun shot that startled me. I asked the pirats where are we they told us that ''we are inthe war of 1812'' we all yeld because we saw Gasparilla and his buccaneers aming there guns at us then the pirats on our cruis ship gave us a small gun then we all started shooting at Gasparilla ''we all yeld oh no he got one of our mates'' we need th get our mate back from him I was the onely one that was brave to sneek on his ship to get our mate. I asked one of the pirates ''can you drive close to his ship so I can get on the ship.'' When I got him I yeld ''I got him'' Then we had enough power to get back to the Destin Harbor.
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Hayden J
2/12/2014 08:37:03 am
One nice hot morning I decided to go rafting with my two friends, Aiden, Cameron and me. When I went over to there house they yelled " let's rock and roll." We pulled the raft into the water and started sailing, at that very moment we heard an enormous "clang! Whoa what was that, then we saw a golden key float up. "Yikes" we ran into Gasparilla!!!! Run. We jumped out of the raft and ran fast enough to get a good look and hide while he and his mates keep guard.
we all ran like pathetic little animals. Then out of the blue black beard came and yelled "arrr!!!!! are you out for a fight" .Everyone screamed no!!! but we had sword so my and mason yelled yes!!! we fought with all our might . Then black beards ship cot fire and sank. Then we felt noble when we got back we lived to tell the tale.
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olivia s
2/12/2014 10:02:03 am
''My family and my friend linsey and me are about to go to the Harbor to go on a pirate ship cruise''.'' I think it will be exelent because I love to ride on ships'' I exclaimed.My freind told me ''we are loading up on the humongous cruise ship'' as she yanked me on the boat.Once everyone stoped on we took of onto our cruise.We looked out the window we saw a ominous storm peared out of no were then I saw a pirate and i recanized him it was captain Goldstein.Linsey yelled ''WE ARE IN THE 1700'S ''.and we were nearly hit by a bom and all I heard was''ahah'' because the people were sscared.I remember there was a basement with a vast amount of guns in it .We got them out and shot them everywhere and the boat moved back and suddenly we were back at the harbor out of no were .Everyone cheered like a murder of crows.
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Max Kilmede
2/12/2014 11:28:39 am
One bright sunny morning my mates and I headed to DestinHarbor for a pirate cruise.There was a lot of shouting and dancing by the crew. Then it got very quiet. I heard someone say a storm was coming,the sky was black and the wind was strong.When I looked down I looked like a pirate and I had a wooden leg, I was standing next to captain Chandler. I shook my head and blnked my eyes and then I realized the cruise was over and it was time to go home.
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Mason
2/13/2014 05:58:33 am
"What was that?" I asked the weird, filthy guy beside me. "Eeeh, some stupid time machine." He said in a nasty voice. "Well, I need to get home!" I said to him. He had disappeared. "Hello? How do I get home?" I shouted. All of a sudden, I was at the Destin Harbor for some reason. I was confused. "Well, it's better than back there." Then I saw my class and ran over to them.
"FIIINNNAAALLLYYY! We earned the fascinating privilege to go on the Destin Harbor Pirate Ship!" exclaimed Natalie with her astonishing vocabulary. We slowly walked up the entrance and saw lousy, fake, and no convincing actresses dressed like Mary Read and Anne Bonny. ( Which was my least favorite activities on the pirate ship) "Shiver Me Timbers, Welcome swashbucklers," announced Captain Gaspar, " Are you ready to see first hand death! Oh Yeah, here's the challenge you can't tell anyone." " EEEEWWW! WE DON'T WANT TO SEE DEATH! WE'LL CRINGE!" Responded ( with an over whelming obnoxious voice) the class.(it almost blew my eardrums out) SWWWOOOOSSSHHH!!!! BAANNGG!!!! AAAAHHHH!!!! " Where are we" I questioned. ( These now more realistic models of the two most brutal females) "What I'm back!" I said relieved. "Class! Class! " yelled Mrs. Goldstein "Yes! Yes!" responded the class.
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maxw
2/13/2014 09:13:38 am
It is good but confusing. I like your vocab but dont use to much diolauge and dont use the parinthesses and caps so much.
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MaxW
2/13/2014 09:09:20 am
One hot-sunny day I was looking for a piece of gold. I roamed the streets of my neighborhood walking and running getting tired and sleepy. I came upon a futuristic ship like orb. I hopped on board the poop deck not noticing that it could be a haunted deathtrap. I got on the helm when it started to move inch by inch. Right before it reached a foot I passed out into a coma. I woke up on which is now a rotten wooden, smelly, sweaty deck that almost made me pass out again. I was on my toes in three seconds from a pirate like voice that shouted "Bootie!". I saw a grown man in barely any clothes with a curved blade, and he was holding it by a piece of wood tied to the blade. He taught me about the very educated famous pirate named Jose Gasparilla, and how he roamed the high seas as a privateer for 40 years. He even explained that there were two woman pirates that were not hanged, but sent to prison. The grown man then told me that a pirate wasn't a man that had a parrot on his shoulder and fought skeletons. A pirate is a man that either steals gold or is hired by the government to hijack a ship and claim it and it's gold as yours. At that very moment privateers boarded the ship. I got knocked over by one of them and woke up in the futuristc ship like orb. I returned home and ate some breakfast. That is how my very odd, smelly and sweaty journey ended.
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Braeden
2/13/2014 09:54:42 am
"What is it?', Mason asked we were walking outside and found a brown ship, "I don't know, time machine. Oh what it is!", I answered.I then put in 1794, "PIRATE TIME!", I yelled doing a funny dance. i was suddenly sucked through the window, into the ship, landed flat on a desk. "GET OUT ME QUARTERS!', Captain Goldstein yelled, he had a black beard, brown hair, and a eyepatch, "Okay BYE-BYE!" I yelled running out onto the slue deck, in the middle of the Atlantic Ocean. We were in a giant crowd of pirates, we said, 'move', excuse me','move it, we ran into the bunker, with a dozen pirates, next thing, lights out, in a cell. THREE DAYS LATER... "Dumb toy ship! How did you even find it?!", I yelled and asked Mason, "In a hole.", he answered, "That's explains a lot, well really not.", I exclaimed. "Okay, free to go, here's your toys. NOW LEAVE!", he commanded. We got on land, and we prayed to go home for hours."Why is it glowing", Mason asked me, " Just hope it brings us hooooooommmmeeee!" I yelled, giong through ticking clocks, speeding calendars, and random pictures and dates."Car, house, no water, no pirates. We're home!" Mason exclaimed. We through it away, we watched it get crushed in the gargantuan, green, smelly garbage truck."Let's go.", we said enthusiastically.
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isabella
2/13/2014 09:35:35 pm
It was a nice sunny day and we were going on the Destine harbor cruise ship and hopped on our cruise ship and sailed off. We saw another sailing ship in the distance and as soon as we know it we are on the ship too. After a while we found that we were in a time traveling pirate ship we heard the captain say '' AHOY MATIES! '' We were back in the 1700's! We saw Gasparillo and his crew burying treasure. We had to run like deer in the prime of hunting season so they would not catch us.
We got back on the cruise ship, but we heard someone say, "After them!" so we traveled back to Destin Harbor. We were safe!
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miguel
2/14/2014 12:18:34 am
Once me and my friend named Greyson went kayaking in the mantee river we sall garspar hinding valuable treasure in the sand we yell 'we didnt see nothing' he started to shoot cannos they narent very good at amingwe started to run in the wilderness they had us corned we had to fight with our weapons Greyson rieplied ' on gaurd' i yelled ' this is not a game' i replied the only person left was Gaspar we got on the boat because we had a plan so we hit him but we still miss we atacked front wards he was on the plank Greyson yelled 'see you later captian and then we pushed him down the pit of perronas and we took the ship back homeevery one was amazed we took down gaspar and took his boat!!
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chris
2/14/2014 12:23:56 am
Finish my time machine now to try it late 1700 now to try it out bamm a cruise ship does this work man.I turned around and saw a bunch of poeple dressed up as a pirate but then they told me who am I so I told my name and they asked me if i would like to join their group and i assepted. now that I am a part of a pirate crew I can help bering treasure and for my first mission i had to find were the treasure. "I don't understand the map and they showed me what the cordnets were" I screamed "20 miles west" and I had enough power to go back home.
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Grace Scarbrough
2/14/2014 12:34:16 am
One hot and sunny summer day my teacher annouced that we were going on the Destin Harbor pirate ship cruise."Yay".We all yelled.We scampered on to the bus and took off."How much longer".shouted Isabella.All of a sudden we came to a stop."We are here". Annoced the bus driver.We all hopped off the bus and on the gigantic,black,and nasty ship."Here we are coming up to a dolphin". "Wow look at that big cloud".shouted Isabella.We saw a pirate ship in the distance."Oh no".Screamed Mrs.Golstien."We have traveled back in time".We all shooted the cannons at the other pirate ship and sayed "bombs away".Our whole class cheered in joy like a clown in a circus!
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Kathryn Ballard
2/14/2014 12:39:21 am
My teacher just anounced that we are going on a pirate cuirse in the Destin Harbor . All of my classmates and I yelled with excitment . Then she announced that we will be meeting all the famous pirates . Then I asked ,"but aren't they all died . Yes she reaplied but we are going back in time . Ok then lets go! We got to meet pirates like Mary Read and Ann Bonny . We also got to shoot the cannons at the other boats . We all had a blast . But like always we had to write about it:)
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linsey
2/19/2014 11:11:02 am
"Hey you guys time to get on the pirate cruise" my mom roared loudly. we were going to get on the pirate cruise that was at the Destin Harbor." Hello buccaneers" a girl shouted in a bandana and buccaneer cloths. Then walked away to greet other people. then we set sails for the seas. Then I noticed something people were acting strange. The boat was old and creaky." I do not think were in the present were in the past"! I screamed There was a thundering cloud under us. then cannons went off ."BOOM"! went the cannons." we are in a fight i stammered" Then for the rest of the time we hid in barrels until someone said " snap snap back" the girl that said hi said. "Wait that's anne bonnie" i whispered to my friend Then finally we were back.
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Natalie Melancon
2/20/2014 10:48:05 am
"Natalie! It's time to go to Destin for the pirate cruise!" Exclaimed my mom. "COMING!!!!!" I shouted. Then we drove to the Destin Harbor Pirate Cruise where we had lots of fun. Suddenly I got homesick. "MOM! I wanna go home!!!" I screamed."Okay let me...... wait. Oh my. Where's the harbor?"she wondered. I wailed " HOW ARE WE EVER GOING TO GET HOME??!!! My mother soothed " It's alright honey. I'll just ask the captain to go back to the harbor." Oookay.I trust you" I frightfully responded. Suddenly "BOOM!" Cannons were everywhere and we finally realized we had gone back in time! I thought to myself" Why did I ever want to come here?"Suddenly a great light flashed like a camera when you don't expect it. Then we were back in present day and I was relieved.
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