Directions: Read the following prompt and sample writing. Think about how you can replace boring, dull adjectives with more descriptive ones and how you can replace unspecific verbs with vivid ones. Rewrite this paragraph using outstanding vocabulary!
Prompt: Think of a time when you accomplished a personal goal. Explain to your readers how you accomplished this goal. Be sure to tell readers why this is important to you.
First, my mom and dad got a bike for my birthday gift. It looked really good. It had wheels, a seat, and a bell that made a sound. I wanted to learn how to ride it so I asked my cousin for lessons. She told me to get on and push with my feet while I went on the road. She said "good job" when I finally did it. I felt great about learning to ride a bike.